風ビュウ ビュウ
十二月です
冬になる
暑いです
ゴロゴロします
休みます
...to document my Japanese learning experience...to see how much I've grown...to share my view of the world IN JAPANESE...
...to document my Japanese learning experience...to see how much I've grown...to share my view of the world IN JAPANESE...
6 comments:
I used katakana to describe the sound of winding blowing "byuu byuu" (onomatopoeia). By using katakana, I hope that it would create the feeling of coldness of December for the readers by hearing the sound.
For my second haiku, I used another onomatopoeia (ゴロゴロ) to create a feeling of laziness under the hot summer sun. On a hot and humid summer day, there is nothing better to do than just lying around. =)
Wow, I really love your katakana literary works, they are so creative! They convey so much information and feeling to your audience in such a small space, great job! I particularly like how you used other writing forms to draw attention to the katakana. I think your use of kanji and hiragana work to give the katakana even more force.
for me the ゴロゴロ is much like a loud sound when men drink!
by far, いちばのもしろいはいく！
I loved your second one so much,
I'm thinking of posting it up on my room.
I like how you combined kanji and katakana in your poems! Very cool.
すごいですね。
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